If i was to redo this i would have chose a different set of character because i am not satisfied with what my characters are, would also choose a different main character for my story and most likely have less character then there are because i think my story is far to busy with the amount of character there are on it.
COMIC NAME - Family values
AGE RANGE - older children, young teens
MORAL - families are more important then you think
STORY- Axel and Jo are really close brothers but one day a old piece of play-doe sets out to end all that Jo wakes up one morning to find his brother gone searching the room endlessly, one by he bumps into his friends who help him search for his lost brother over the course of the comic they get ever close but each time they get close to putty he backs further and further of from Jo and his friends , eventually the army ( mega/Lego blocks) track him down and inform Jo who proceeds to get angry and rescues his brother melting putty in the process and freeing a unsuspecting pencil in the process the whole comic end in the toys having a party in Axels name and same return
this is my first comic and i think on this one if i was to redo it i would most likely redo the first cell and maybe of added some more of my own photograph because it don't seem to flow as well as the others do.
this is my second comic this one i like more then the first because it flows better and i have used more mixed media like Photograph, Photoshop,Drawings and Illustrator to create this.
this is my third comic this is mainly my own photographs with drawing edited in photoshop place over the top in illustrator.
this is my fourth comic in this it is the first time my character called Axel is seen separated from the bad character called putty if i was to redo this comic i would make the car more integrated within the background because it don't look very good.
this is my fifth comic this is the set where Axel is freed from his capture in putty , Jo is told where his brother is and sets out to get him back ....... this comic i like and don't wish anything to change.
this is my sixth and final comic in this my character are having a party in celebration of Axel's return i like this the most out of all the comic slides and i would change it.
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